UrnSudden's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eye]

I really like the amount of detail you put in the iris and lashes, But a couple of things bother me. The tear duct looks a little too pointed and bright for its location on the eye. Second would be how stark the shading is on the left side of the eyeball itself. I feel it could use some gradual modulation toward the iris. The shadow doesn't seem to fit the form of the eye either, But that could be potentially because of the sharpness, i'm not entirely sure... But other than that, I love it, and respect the amount of time it seems you've put in it.

Kyrart responds:

Thank you so much for your critique. This was actually the first drawing I did in a few months for the fact I have been in a serious art rut. I made this to prove to myself I still have some talent left and focused a lot on the iris and not so much on the surrounding area. Next time I will go further in depth and put more time towards the rest. Thank you again, very awesome input :D

[State of Mind]

I've always been a fan of dark, inky, dripping art, So i'm liking this. Reminds me of Stephen Gammel's work in scary stories, except with a slightly harder edge about it.

[Wasted Youth]

Domino

nice....those details are amazing...what resolution do you use?

[Kayla Moon]

its ok

but the proportions and perspective feels very off...

darthnebula responds:

Yeah it was my first time trying to attempt some form of distance and dynamic lighting, it is a little all over but I'm working on it

[Neil]

BRO!

you should have said he was related to that stretchy dude from the fantastic 4...CAUSE his arm looks funny...like STREEETCH A SLAP ur FaCe!ie disproportionate.

[Kokoroed]

nice.

i've always loved the strictly black and white art style,and this added another fathom to it.it's usually exaggerated proportions with weak levels of darks,wich was still visually pleasing,but this is overall better.

[Avatarded the Trurd]

haha

lol.this is lovely.i thought it was funny.

[shooter babe]

pretty good

but the head looks pretty small,and the neck is a bit long/yhin looking.

[Shtarbooks]

yes

coffee is good,but in all actuality,the art lacks anything interesting,i like coffee,and the style of art that is this.and the linework is better than anything i can do.

[OnionsXD]

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you have inspired me to do the same....i will REVIEW AGAIN WHEN IT IS COMPLETED.....if your eyes were in the realisticish means,they would be white and red....i feel smart.man i haven't even started the She-me drawing and i've had a bunch of periods within the time i started the headline.as for the art style....a tad bit lacking,especially considering its considered "fine art",though that was part of the humor,am i right?